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Nobody But You...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Ive sat and read the words,I've tasted many tears
My heart is reaching out and wants to hold you near
Such sorrow in the words you pen,you tell of pain so real
I wish for you in many ways,you were numb and could not feel
But lack of feeling will not help you,nor could a poem of words
You must look into your heart and soul,where beauty can be heard
Do not forsake your worthiness,your right to wear a smile
I know bad times will come and go,but they'll not last a life times while
There are people here who love you,care about you and they hope
That everyday you'll feel much better,in your struggle just to cope
You are beautiful,please know this,do not drown in lifes storms
For beauty also comes with rain,it shines in many forms
Never let the people judge you,and mostly do not judge yourself
For we are all who we "choose" to be,and we cant be anybody else
Now isn't that just lucky,for what would we ever do
If Becca you were anyone else,but sweet beautiful you
I for one will always be here,whether dark or light of day
I know that you can make it through,together we'll find a way
So Becca wont you listen,feel my arms wrapped 'round you
Lets push away those dark grey clouds,and let some sunshine through
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-06-22 22:35:00]
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Re: Nobody But You...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 11:29:46 PM AEST
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This poem shows what a lovely and caring person you are, Whispers.... I'm sure Becca will appreciate this...
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Re: Nobody But You...
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 11:41:14 PM AEST
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| oh wow sharon!! this is sooo beautiful! i have chills and im crying all over, i cant wait till becca reads this poem!! your so right in what you say, she needs to know shes loved, and needed, all these kids do, i love them all like my own too, big huggs and love to you, nessa |
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Re: Nobody But You...
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by juliette on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 12:19:09 AM AEST
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What a sweet poem! Becca is lucky to have you.
P.S. I needed to read something uplifting tonite - Thanks for the smile=)
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Re: Nobody But You...
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by Trisha on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 01:26:45 AM AEST
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| AnyWay's I really do like this and I think you really do care about her |
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Re: Nobody But You...
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 02:06:42 AM AEST
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Very good write and you showed how many of us feel as we read her poems
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Re: Nobody But You...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 02:12:51 PM AEST
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Wow, Thank you Sharon this certainly is a very beauti***** poem, and is definitly uplifting, i love it, i dont know what to say...i am speechless, but everyone is right in saying i am lucky to have friends like you, i almost believe i dont deserve them.
Keep Smiling!
Your Friend
- Becca |
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Re: Nobody But You...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 02:13:55 PM AEST
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ok i have noo idea why it blocked out half of beautiful....maybe i mispelled sorry :S
-Becca |
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Re: Nobody But You...
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by Sapphire on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 08:38:22 AM AEST
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Your friends are very lucky to have a friend like you. This is so beautiful, so full of feeling.
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Re: Nobody But You...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 11:03:42 PM AEST
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You know, i just read this again and i realised just how much i miss you...
Where are you hun? are you ok? Just remember that i love you and i'll always be here when you need me
And i just have to say once again how beautiful this poem is, and to apologise (yet again) for the blocked half of beautiful...geez i bet its a real pain in the butt!
LOL! Hope your well and Take care
Lots of Love 'n Hugs
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