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I Gave It All To You
Contributed by
juliette
on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Here we are
Truly worlds apart
Still you try to hold my heart
As if I owe you this
Somewhere in time
I laid my life on the line
For you without reason or rhyme
You left me like this
To walk alone in steps I am unsure of
To crawl through this place forever without love
Because I gave it all to you
And now I’m empty
No tenderness dwells in me
Nobody else can reach my soul
It is out of my control
Because I gave it all to you.
I begged you to turn your life around
You saw me crumble and let me lie down
At your feet, weak and beaten
And you – never found the words to say
Even after I turned away
You’d still rather break me then lose
Can’t you see – You left me like this
To walk alone in steps I am unsure of
To crawl through this place without love
Because I gave it all to you
And now I’m empty
No tenderness dwells in me
Nobody else can reach my soul
It is out of my control
Because I gave it all to you.
Copyright ©
juliette
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2003-06-22 16:05:00]
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Re: I Gave It All To You
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by Goebelclm73 on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 04:48:36 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem! I can relate to this, are you sure you didn't write it for me? Kidding. Seriously though, I'm not sure I'll ever be the same again after what I've gone through with my wife these past 5 months.
Great write!
Christopher
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Re: I Gave It All To You
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by Jilly on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 07:13:56 PM AEST
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| I once felt the same way. Four years have passed since the seperation and still no divorce but that has not hindered my healing.I have never been as happy I am now...Completely free to be Jilly not MRS blah blah blah!!! I would like to have the "final closure" ...in time!! Great write!! |
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Re: I Gave It All To You
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by Suzy on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 07:56:43 PM AEST
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What a sad beautiful poem...to let someone have that much control over you hurts like hell, and someday it will pass and love will find its way in again...hope things brighten for you soon..
Lasca |
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Re: I Gave It All To You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 11:38:35 PM AEST
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truly a beautiful poem..but so, so sad.... I hope you fnd the closure you seek very soon...
Jenni |
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