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morning
Contributed by
zeroelysium
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Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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why is it so easy yet so hard
even the simplest task become monumentous
so hard to get moving
would rather sleep
spend snoozing my day
will it all go away?
there under the sheets
where im safe to weep
so easy in here
such a stuggle out there why does it have to be so tough
to get out of bed
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zeroelysium
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2003-06-22 10:45:00]
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Re: morning
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by norm on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 11:22:30 AM AEST
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Your poem tells many things..it's a good poem...a make you think poem...
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the reason to get out of bed
to find a better place, in stead
If this ain't done then what's the fun
Stay in bed is what is said... |
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Re: morning
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 12:38:34 PM AEST
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Kid this is a good poem but I am still rather concerned
Mom |
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Re: morning
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 10:25:48 AM AEST
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i feel like that too sometimes,
when all warm and cozy,
'cause sometimes life,
is not always rosey:)
@->>->>- here's a rose for your wonderful poem and the happiness, hope n' beauty it carries to you, hugs n' love nessa |
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