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Light Of Absence (v2)
Contributed by
ronald
on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 06:34:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dawn of night, rays of darkness,
Regrets pulsed, my body shivers,
Under the eyes of amber,
And doubts, spin around,
In tyranny,
In the sight of mind,
Somehow,
Escape, has escaped,
Law of tears apply,
Trapped within its concrete,
Border of walls,
Alas, unbreakable...
Indeed,
This is a dungeon,
That chauffeurs thoughtlessly,
To the abyss of state,
Where tidal waves,
Rises up in cruelty,
In the sea of emotions,
Till pearls of heavens,
Engulfed,
Gone,
In its depths...
It just seems me,
Days of flight,,
Relieved by the uninvited,
Guest of thorns!
Guest of pain!
Robbing the joy and hope,
Stripping this heart
Of security.
Now, tell me,
How long more, do have to live,
Under the covers that you've placed?
I'm not at home,
As long as I am,
Under the light of absence...
Copyright ©
ronald
... [
2002-08-08 06:34:45]
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Re: Light Of Absence (v2)
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by Phildel on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 06:57:43 AM AEST
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Hi Ronald,
I like your poem, particularly the images you created, the disjoint sounds reflect the jagged mood of the poem,
Thanks for the read!
Regards,
Phildel |
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Re: Light Of Absence (v2)
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 01:19:12 AM AEST
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I liked the first version Ronald but I must say this is even better.. some vivid imagery here.
Chrissie x |
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