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Child of Grace
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
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Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Please stop the banging daddy
You know I can�t let you in
Stop rattling the door daddy
I�m sorry I made you mad again
Please leave me alone daddy
You don�t know what I�m going through
I�m trying to block out the sound daddy
But I can�t, I don�t know what to do.
I know you�re angry at me daddy
But can�t we talk it out?
Why do you have to punish me daddy
Physically, and then shout?
I must be a really bad child, daddy
To make you say the things you say
I really don�t know what I did daddy
To make you hit and push me this way.
I hate having to hide daddy
I hate hearing you scream
I try not to love you daddy
But I always have this dream
That some day you�ll see, daddy
What you�re doing to me
That some day, daddy, you�ll realize
What a true family is supposed to be
I�m trying to hate you daddy
With what you do, I shouldn�t have to try
But I�m your little girl, and you�re my daddy
And I�ll love you until the day I die.
I�m trying to tell you this daddy
But you can�t hear me through your yells
I pray to God to have mercy on you, daddy
When you die, I don�t want you to go to hell.
I�m so sorry I made you mad, daddy
I promise I won�t do it again.
Oh no, daddy, don�t pick the lock
Please don�t come in.
I don�t want to die yet daddy
I�m just a little girl
I�m starting to see a little funny, daddy
Everything�s becoming a blur.
I feel my head hit the wall
I feel blood run down my back
I spoke a few last words to daddy
Before everything went black
I said I love you very much daddy
And I�m sorry you never knew that.
Copyright ©
BlackFire9786
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2003-06-21 15:35:00]
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Re: Child of Grace
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by norm on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 05:06:32 PM AEST
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| It hurts to read this poem..it is powerful |
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Re: Child of Grace
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 06:55:04 PM AEST
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Very strong write,, you feel the childs innocense,, the longing for love from an abusive parent,, this brought back some painful memories,, but the problem needs to be addressed.
Shari |
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Re: Child of Grace
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 08:08:53 AM AEST
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| This brought tears to my eyes. A beautiful write and I do agree that this is a problem that needs to be addressed and not just soon, now. |
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Re: Child of Grace
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:15:33 AM AEST
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all to real lisa...all to real...*sigh*
Your Twin,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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