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Summer of discontent
Contributed by
mikkh
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Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The sun is bright, but it's dark in my heart
Each lonely night, seems to tear me apart
Another day without you, another day like the last
A love once so true, just a feeling that passed?
The sky, perfect blue, but I see only rain
The plants, green and new, as for me?, not again!
The summer will end, the pain will live on
No need to pretend, admit that she's gone
The winter is nigh, and alone in my bed
The years will pass by, but the summer, I'll dread...
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mikkh
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2003-06-21 08:35:00]
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Re: Summer of discontent
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 09:09:33 AM AEST
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sad, but very touching, you painted your lonliness very vividly
Shari |
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Re: Summer of discontent
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by Saira on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 02:44:52 PM AEST
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| Very heart touching. Good write! |
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Re: Summer of discontent
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by oh_carol on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:54:59 PM AEST
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2003? must have been a terrible year for you
Whoever it was must have truly broke your heart |
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Re: Summer of discontent
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by oh_carol on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:55:33 PM AEST
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2003? must have been a terrible year for you
Whoever it was must have truly broke your heart |
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