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Healed
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
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Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
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This battle brews in my heart
It has no end, it has no stop
As the wind blows in my face
I scream at the fear
That my heart tastes
I fear the terror,
But not much longer
For I see the tunnel
Leading to heaven yonder
My heart is tired, beaten, worn
It has been weathered, scarred and torn
I see the end, coming near
I feel the fading of my fear
I'm going now, Please don’t cry
My fear is healed, and so am I.
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BlackFire9786
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2003-06-21 07:05:00]
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Re: Healed
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 09:12:40 AM AEST
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| you wrote this at 10??.... that's pretty deep for a 10 year old... great write, much better than my first I can tell you that much. :) |
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Re: Healed
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 09:31:52 AM AEST
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Your talent showed strong even then, glad you stuck around to write more, for it would be sad to waste such a gift
Shari |
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Re: Healed
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:08:02 AM AEST
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i remember the day you wrote this...you came running into my room and asked me to read it...then i wrote a poem and that's how all this maddness started! lol...i love it. take care sis.
Your Twin,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: Healed
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 12:48:53 PM AEST
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I have been reading a few of your poems and your a really good writer. I can't get over it. How old are you?
Keep up the excellent writing
Hiddendarkness1705 |
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Re: Healed
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 03:36:44 PM AEST
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| thank you for the compliment, :D i'm 15 years old, so i wrote this one about 5 years ago. |
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Re: Healed
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 04:37:23 AM AEST
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| Totally amazing for a ten year old. A wonderful talent indeed. So much wisdom for one so young.Excellent |
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