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Just a little child
Contributed by
MissMichelle
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Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm just a little child
Although my age says another thing
I've lost my childhood
So I'm searching for something to fill in
All the magical things children should go through
The love of a mother, love of a father
And all the happy days, that I've never knew
Copyright ©
MissMichelle
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2003-06-20 21:05:00]
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Re: Just a little child
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 09:33:38 PM AEST
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I can relate to this completely, great write
luv ya lotz-lisa |
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Re: Just a little child
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by punkwthn on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 12:47:51 AM AEST
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| Good poem. It's short and simple yet to the point. Very well-written. |
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Re: Just a little child
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by venkat on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 03:46:37 AM AEST
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| Oh, child..take my sunshine in the morning and inhale the fresh air at the time of dawn..I am sure you will enjoy the love of mother nature.. venkat |
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Re: Just a little child
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:41:36 AM AEST
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| Oh...this was so sad. A great poem filled with emotion. Hope you keep your chin up MissMichelle, life will get better. I can't say that I can understand what you are going thru because I can't so I won't lie and say that I do understand, but I have been thru alot of stuff in my short life adn I do know that life goes on and wounds heal. I'm gonna keep checking for more of your writing |
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Re: Just a little child
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by vincy on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 08:38:34 PM AEST
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Michelle my heart goes out to you
your ability to arouse such raw emotion
that we all share. the thing you are searching for
you already have it, it is called poetry. ( tak ) |
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