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soul-less
Contributed by
nidzb
on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I stand here alone
In a green grass field
Slowly melting...
I stand here alone
In a green grass field
Seeping into the soil...
I stand here alone
In a green grass field
Sucked into the roots of oblivion.
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nidzb
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2003-06-20 19:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: soul-less
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:06:45 AM AEST (User
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not 2 bad a poem, but you are right it is definately not dark. |
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Re: soul-less
(User Rating: 1 ) by Percursors on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 08:32:56 PM AEST (User
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this is a pretty good poem...i liked it...good job... |
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