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So Long!
Contributed by
lowman613
on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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So Long, Good bye,
Its time I go,
You ask why,
I'll tell you so,
I'm going on a trip,
far away from here,
I'm loosing my grip,
on life so I fear,
I'll be gone for days,
I cant take this much more,
I just need to get away,
maybe to the sunny shores,
I 'll be looking for the sun,
For I know its out there,
I need to find the fun,
because its not here,
So I'll see you all very soon,
but now I must go away,
following that bright full moon,
I'll see you again some day!
Copyright ©
lowman613
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2003-06-20 10:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: So Long!
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 10:42:38 AM AEST (User
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Have a great trip and get yourself a great suntan Christina!!
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Re: So Long!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 10:48:19 AM AEST (User
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Awww Christina,I know what you mean.
My mother is on the east coast and has had rain 40days out of 50! She feels the same way!!! I hope you get a nice relaxing time in the sun if you can find it these days!
Enjoy and don't forget to pen some poetry
while you're away! {{{christina}}}
Have a safe journey my friend...godspeed!
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Re: So Long!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 10:58:37 AM AEST (User
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Have a great trip Christina but don't stay away too long.
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Re: So Long!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 11:26:06 PM AEST (User
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enjoy your trip we will be thinking of you
Shari |
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Re: So Long!
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:19:23 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful rendering..enjoy sunny shores..best of luck christina.. venkat |
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Re: So Long!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saira on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 03:07:09 PM AEST (User
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Have a jovial time Christina! You'll be missed a lot. |
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Re: So Long!
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 06:45:44 PM AEST (User
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have fun!! much love to you and yours, hey hey hurry back we'll miss you but soak up bunches of rays first! ha! nessa |
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Re: So Long!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 07:38:58 PM AEST (User
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:S
Another friend gone from the site.
I hope to hear from you really soon Christina.
I come back and you're gone.
LOL JK
Hope to see you soon my friend.
*S* Cynthia |
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