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Another Flatline
Contributed by
TeenageEmoGirl
on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I hate this
I hate you being so sweet
I hate it because I know we'll never be
I'd die the death of a hopeless romantic
Choke as you sweep me off my feet
You'd then proceed to make me bleed
You dropped me and unapologetically left
And I was alone
Without one word, without a goodbye
I was alone and left to die
But I came running back to you
And told you it was all okay
I forgave you in a second
Just so you'd stay
And I pleaded with you
"Make me bleed just how you used to"
Whisper sweet nothings into my ear
All the things I long to hear
Tell me all the things that drive me wild
Make me carefree just like a child
But here I go again mixing reality with fantasy
But believe me I'm not as twisted as I seem
I've never felt like this
But I'm still stuck in the dream
I have when we kiss
You moved on from me, I was just yours to use
Its all your fault- its you I accuse
I know you like her and she likes you
And you know I'm left here not knowing what to do
I'll make her know what jealousy's all about
In my head, this is just fate, without a doubt
I'll slit her throat, watch her bleed and die
Then run to you as you cry
With my own covered in blood, I'll grab your hands
And tell you its all better now
You've ruined me, because no one makes me feel how you had
And my friends tell me its your loss
Then why does victory hurt so bad?
Copyright ©
TeenageEmoGirl
... [
2003-06-20 04:05:00]
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Re: Another Flatline
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 08:48:04 AM AEST
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| This is a really good write, but at the same time quite dark and sort of scary. However I do love it and you have just describe everything I have just been through. Good work, I will be keeping an eye out for more of your writing. |
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Re: Another Flatline
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 09:27:36 AM AEST
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This is suc a good poem. It flows really well and you really know how to make others understand how you are feeling. Excellent. You have real talent.
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Re: Another Flatline
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by Trisha on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 07:29:45 PM AEST
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| I Like This And EveryThing You Write Is Long |
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Re: Another Flatline
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 02:35:07 PM AEST
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