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Puddles
Contributed by
Lady_bubbles420
on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Cold--Gentle--
Raindrops fall upon my face
Eyes closed
I lose myself
In the steady patter
Landing on my eyes
For a moment
Silence fills me
Swallow me whole
For a moment
I am at peace
With myself and the world
Chaos leaves me
For someone else
And I realize
How beautiful
Stomping in puddles is
And how deceptively easy
Simplicity is returned
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Lady_bubbles420
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2003-06-19 23:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Puddles
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:37:24 AM AEST (User
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What a simple yet beautiful poem. Really great.
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Re: Puddles
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 09:28:47 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful poem. All too often we forget to recognize the beauty of this world. Thanks for reminding me. |
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