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just so
Contributed by
zeroelysium
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Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i sit and weep when you arent around,
i alone and weep without a sound.
just so you dont see.
just so you dont know.
exactly how torn i really am ,
so you dont have to worry .
i slip on my smiling mask ,
just so you dont cry .
i pretend i dont want to die ,
just so you are happy i hide my pain, my tears , myself....
so many way to kill myself without killing myself
just so you are happy
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zeroelysium
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2003-06-19 21:35:00]
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Re: just so
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:15:59 PM AEST
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Oh wow... there's so much real emotion in this. You should never feel you have to pretend to be happy for anyone. I completely understand the need to avoid bringing someone else down with your own unhappiness, but if this person is a true friend, and they found out you'd been faking and not being honest with them about how you've been feeling, they would probably be upset that you felt you couldn't be honest with them. Just make sure you know what's most important.
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Re: just so
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 03:19:30 AM AEST
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hey kid, this one kindof worried me, e-mail me
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Re: just so
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:00:17 AM AEST
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This is a worrying poem. I hope you are OK. The poetic style is brilliant. It was disturbing to read but I also enjoyed the real emotion in it.
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Re: just so
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 06:35:22 PM AEST
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| awww! we all feel sad sometimes, your not alone, may the sun shine on you and happiness touch your soul soon, hugs n' love nessa |
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