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The Gift Of Enternal Life
Contributed by
DarylLew151
on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I'm so broken i'll never heal
I'm so pained i cannot feel
I'm so proud of the scars i recieve
I'm so happy to trust what i believe
My eyes are so open but i am blind
My body so warn i can't feel what i find
My ears so used noise cannot be heard
My mouth so twisted i can't speak by word
I have a soul so black, I none dare to save
I have an id so wild all it want to enslave
I have been forsaken by all i know and all i don't
I have a regrets for what i will do and what i won't
I know you cannot love me
You know little of what you see
I know the truth of my existence
You only know lies and pretence
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DarylLew151
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2003-06-19 18:35:00]
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Re: The Gift Of Enternal Life
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:07:46 PM AEST
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Great job on this, I really enjoyed it. It's wonderful!
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Re: The Gift Of Enternal Life
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by Anglea on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:25:51 PM AEST
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| Poem is great! I really enjoyed reading it! |
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