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Selfish Ways
Contributed by
humphdj
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Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 08:17:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The worst thing in the world to do
Is hurt the one your closest to
For selfish ways do disappear
So quickly, when their sobs you hear
Then all to late you realize
Your world revolves within those eyes
That cry your hurt, like letting go
The comfort there you used to know
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2002-08-07 20:17:12]
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Re: Selfish Ways
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by chatabox on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 09:24:28 PM AEST
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mmm yes, wise words, but when you are busy being selfish you dont want to see what you are doing to someone else.
short and to the point....wonderful write Dave.
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Re: Selfish Ways
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by Written2bRead on
Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 06:42:15 AM AEST
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| When I first saw this, I was thinking, "what a short poem", but you said what you needed to say in the best way. "What have I done?" is too short of a way to randomly force these great feelings into 4 words... this poem has a lot of meaning, every word is really strong. L8sauce |
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Re: Selfish Ways
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 06:32:14 AM AEST
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You have a gift for writing a few words that speak volumes. I love this one Dave
Chrissie xx |
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