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Out Loud

Contributed by Daniel on Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 11:03:02 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

mark 2, 3, 4, bolt for the front door
i already know what this is for
don't you know that there can't be any more?

messing up the line
and i'm trying here again
i can't find any friend
and no i can't find the end
ending of this little thing
every time it'll bring
further down the spiral
like i have this viral disease
oh please!
don't you tease me with that
i'm not such a brat
and i see where you're coming at
yes i know i'll go
far away far away from here
shutting up now yes now so
you can be far away not near

i lost myself along a long long time ago
i thought that you would know
but i guess that i should go home
you can't come now because you need to stay
you know it needs to be that way
but all i know i don't say out loud

dressing up real pretty
feeling all the pity
upon myself is this feeling
no matter what life is dealing
no closer is a healing
stealing every sanity
can't even have a vanity
walk and talk profanity
the inhumanity!
i'm understanding i can't live
not like unto this will i give
any part of me that creative
holding close to that
but soon i will let it on go
oh you know about that
i thought you couldn't know

i lost myself along a long long time ago
i thought that you would know
but i guess that i should go home
you can't come now because you need to stay
you know it needs to be that way
but all i know i don't say out loud

mark 2, 3, 4, bolt for the front door
i already know what this is for
don't you know that there can't be any more?

***
(7/11/02)

Copyright © Daniel ... [ 2002-07-12 11:03:02]
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Re: Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by lilsmurfy on Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 04:42:02 AM AEST
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very nicely done and well written ..very good write :)

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