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Mixed Emotions
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Mixed emotions
Wanting to be in your arms
Away from all danger
You kept me from harm
Mixed emotions
Wanting to hurt you
Causing you pain
Like you put me through
Mixed emotions
Of loving you so
Needing to be with you
When times are even low
Mixed emotions
Such hatred burns within
Cant seem to find any remorse
Wishing the agony would end
Mixed emotions
Love and hate
Horrible to mix them
Never something great
Mixed emotions
Not sure of much
I know I miss your smile
I know I miss your touch
Mixed emotions
Not wanting to be through
Wanting to be less at times
But......I cant live without you...
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Re: Mixed Emotions
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 05:22:50 PM AEST
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Your poem is good and meaningful...
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from the dawn of the day to the set of the sun
a myriad number of things seem to run,
thru the mind of a girl and the mind of a boy
do not be careless or you will destroy...
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Re: Mixed Emotions
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 05:10:03 AM AEST
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Been the male part of your stuation more times than I care to remember. Your dramatic poem openned my eyes a lot to what some girls go through. Very good use of repetition!
My only excuse is in a poem I wrote called "He's not the only one" (it's message might help) |
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Re: Mixed Emotions
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 07:01:21 PM AEST
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| I've read your poem before, I was merely stating, that I cannot live without him as a friend. Our friendship is as stake and I dont want to lose that. I could care less about actually being 'with' him. |
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Re: Mixed Emotions
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by xxmonstahxx on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 02:36:08 PM AEST
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| beautifully written.. it's so hard when you hate the person you truly love |
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