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So much to do. So little time.
Contributed by
ed
on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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So much to do,
So little time.
So much to do,
So little time.
So much to do,
So little time.
You can't turn back.
You can't turn back.
You can't turn back.
No mistakes.
No mistakes.
Please no more mistakes.
Lay your foundations to sow your seed.
Lay your foundations to sow your seed.
Lay your foundations to sow your seed.
Job done.
Game over.
You die.
You die .
You die.
Freedom.
New generation.
So much to do.
So little time.
So much to do.
So little time.
So much to do.
So little time.
You can't turn back.
You can't turn back.
You can't trun back.
No mistakes.
No mistakes.
Please no more mistakes.
Lay your foundations to sow your seed.
Lay your foundations to sow your seed.
Lay your foundations to sow your seeds.
Death.
New generation over and over.
Perhaps you should try to love in between?
Love the sun, the stars, the moon, the clouds, the sky and the sea.
Love to hate all things hateful.
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ed
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2003-06-19 10:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: So much to do. So little time.
(User Rating: 1 ) by norm on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:46:59 AM AEST (User
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your poem is well constructed.
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you speak about love
this is fine as can be
but your forgetting a love
between you and me
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To be more precise,
I think t'would be nice
to love a woman
at least once or twice
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Re: So much to do. So little time.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:50:28 AM AEST (User
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I do like this and I do like this way you put this. |
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