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Below The Deep Blue Sea
Contributed by
Enfuego
on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Through the highest mountain tops across
the Red Sea, along the Great Coral Reefs
and below the deep blue sea
There is where I saw her
but then it was just a dream
her eyes glared like lonely rubies
her lips like a bloodless stream
Through the highest mountain tops, I searched
to find this enchantress I seek
my feet, frozen and sore
my lonely heart, was on the brink
Along the Great Coral Reefs I looked
my eyes dry from the costal sand
at last my heart could take no more
and I laid down upon the land
Through the highest mountain tops across the
Red ee, along the Great Coral Reefs,
there my body was to wither and die
my ashes scattered, below the deep blue sea
Copyright ©
Enfuego
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2003-06-19 06:35:00]
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Re: Below The Deep Blue Sea
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 07:33:02 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful and so sad. Great work.
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Re: Below The Deep Blue Sea
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:14:56 AM AEST
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lovely although rather sad, very good write
Shari
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Re: Below The Deep Blue Sea
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by shelby on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:20:27 AM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Below The Deep Blue Sea
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by Enfuego on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:29:32 AM AEST
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| Thank you very much, I truly apperciate it. |
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Re: Below The Deep Blue Sea
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by Enfuego on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:32:44 AM AEST
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| Thank you :) |
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Re: Below The Deep Blue Sea
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by Enfuego on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:36:15 AM AEST
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| Thank you very much |
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Re: Below The Deep Blue Sea
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 12:23:30 PM AEST
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Awww..this is such a wonderful write... True love!!
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Re: Below The Deep Blue Sea
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by Enfuego on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:10:32 PM AEST
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| Thank you Jenni :) |
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