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Running away from it all
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A little girl as sweet as the blue skies
As beautiful as the stars
Runs from her silent cries
Runs from her scars
Leaving no trace
She runs away
Wanting her cold memories to erase
Wanting to find a better day
Lonely and cold inside
She cries herself to sleep
In the darkness she hides
To cry and weep
She tries to get away from it all
But inside of her it stays
She will soon stumble and fall
She will never get away
Loneliness takes over
There is no where left to run
Like a broken four leaf clover
Her life is done.
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Re: Running away from it all
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:33:22 AM AEST
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this was beautifully sad written with such emotion. You express what you have to say so eloquently in just a few lines. Something few can do.
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Re: Running away from it all
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by shelby on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:29:25 AM AEST
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touching write well done.
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Re: Running away from it all
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:57:07 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful and so sad. Great writing!!!
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Re: Running away from it all
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by Anglea on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 11:40:46 PM AEST
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| wonderful write! I enjoyed it very much! |
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