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Wheres the sun?????
Contributed by
lowman613
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Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Rain in my eyes,rain on my face,
Rain is everywhere,
In this soggy wet place,
When will this rain stop,
pouring on my heart,
Its killing all the farmers crop,
its giving my days a bad start,
Every day I look for the sun,
but rain clouds appear,
not today there will be no fun,
as the people start to disapear,
wheres the sun,& the summer play,
we so longed for,
we wait till the end of the day,
but then it starts to pour,
No sand castles or riding bikes,
for the thunder is what I hear,
no volley ball or long nature hikes,
just put away that swimming gear,
For this rain puts a damper on things,
I cant take much more,
the kids cant even use the swings,
just looking out the door,
Wheres the sun,
Does any one know,
I need some fun,
before I see the snow!
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Re: Wheres the sun?????
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 12:23:15 AM AEST
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*smile* Lovely write, Christina..hope the sun shows its face soon...
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Re: Wheres the sun?????
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by kels497 on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 12:24:22 AM AEST
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| cute..hehe |
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Re: Wheres the sun?????
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:56:40 AM AEST
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| awww christina! you can have all the sun here, i love rain and the sound on the roof, would prefer it to sun any day, your poem is so full of feeling i wish i could send sunshine off to you by the bunches!! tell your rain to go south and ill tell the sun move north lol, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Wheres the sun?????
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by venkat on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 02:20:29 AM AEST
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At your place the rain is killing the farmers crop...At my place the monsoon rains are still very weak...giving no hopes to farmers..
Thanks Christina for sharing this..this is a vivid and beautiful poem on nature.. venkat |
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Re: Wheres the sun?????
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 03:12:04 AM AEST
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I'm sorry Lowman, I know in Korea the monsoon is just getting started. Well nice write, hope the sun shines soon for you.
The Phantom |
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Re: Wheres the sun?????
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by shelby on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 09:33:05 AM AEST
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Christina we do get a monsoon season here in the desert but there isn't a bit of rain, Im missing the rain. its blue sky sunshine blowing dirt and sand dirt devils and HEAT triple digets everyday here. We spent the afternoon in the pool to make it more pleasant yeaterday. So I have an idea lets trade, Ill give you a week of this dry heat for a week of that cool pouring rain and thunder..
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