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Attencion
Contributed by
Lele
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Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Many funnies.
Many jokes.
Many importance.
I wanted it.
But, in the end,
I, only, got to be depressed.
Why do I do it?
I don't know
Why am I going to become it ?
I don't know, too.
I'm looking for...
Please, forget , forgive it,
forgive me all the things that I did.
Copyright ©
Lele
... [
2003-06-18 23:05:00]
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Re: Attencion
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by vincy on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 04:30:05 AM AEST
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there is a feeling of natural humility here
and an honesty and truthfulness about it
which makes this poem, despite bad grammer
rather interesting and enjoyable. |
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Re: Attencion
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by Lele on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 12:41:02 PM AEST
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Thank you, I myself belive that it hasn't a good grammar, but it 's sincer's poem.
I think that is my problem is find the corrects words to put on the poem's contexts.
Now, I'd like to know if I know Speaking Spanish, because if you maybe I coud send a
Spanish or portugues poem(portuguese as not
as iqual like Spanish language, but is similar, Would you like to try it?).
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