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you got me crazy

Contributed by wassim on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

YOU GOT ME CRAZY
you got me crazy cose i loved you i layed my eyes on you at the moment i felt without you crushed and crumbled i'm feeling very cold can you bring these blesses back i can't control my self like a fool im not that cruel i just remember the time it hit my heart make me fall apart lisining to your sound in my mind again feeling like a chadow damn i just sit on the floor counting my cards waiting for you with the tears having a lot of fears playing my sound feeling the romance i started to dance but i realised it's fake my depression you couldin't take from this night mare i need to be awake please i need your breath to catch till the love in my heart hatch going strong i try to denie it make me dong going crazy hitting the walls talking to you in the stars shinge away to your arms feeling the power when it grab us together falling in love for ever and when i see you i cry more just close that hell door can you get to me closer but sadley i'm still here frozen please come back and play that romantic track at the light of the moon in a relashenship i hope soon i love you grab my arms feel my charge like the wind falling to the stars pick up my sol screaming your name love what i suffer for it's stored with the depression i still have please don't lafe so come and kiss these tears away to a better world to a better way into love falling inside at that day.

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Re: you got me crazy (User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Bubbles420 on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 10:47:22 PM AEST
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This poem is good although it can be hard to follow. You picked a subject that everyone can relate to. Good job!

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