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He Vacuum Twenty-Three Coca Cola

Contributed by Adam_Gaucher on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 08:05:48 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Realize, it's quite cold today
for the choosy human being.
"This ain't Miami beach sister!"
I agree geographically.

You're one of those people who
don't eat the peels off of oranges
aren't you? "Why actually, yes
I am!" Well, you'll not find me in
that euphoric pancake morning
anytime soon. Continue painting.

(Turn to reader, proceed slow walk).

I've found that the difference between
an artist and a good artist is
that the good artist actually knows they
produce nothing but crap. Then
there are the great artists who don't
produce anything at all, usually in
acting, every second of their lives.
Because it's one for the honey. Two
for the blow. Three for stuffed
Betty on Thanksgiving day, and
goat bleat goat.

What you've seen here is how
we have generated a prime example
of crap-core artistics. (The big
breasted super model situates her
arms to further aid in advertising
the aforementioned product. She
also sports a mini skirt). You'll
find when reading that the cerebral
cortex is not genuinely pleased
throughout with this outcome.
Observe again:
I thank you for wasting your
time and mine.

Last call!
Fade out: a varied clink of glass
and the unintelligible conversing
of a small crowd.

Copyright © Adam_Gaucher ... [ 2002-08-07 20:05:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: He Vacuum Twenty-Three Coca Cola (User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 12:22:09 AM AEST
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This piece is a breath of fresh air... So interesting... so unique... I like the direction you put in this... I can see and hear everything... Just overall a very good write... looking forward to reading more of your work... thinking about looking more up right now! Thank you for sharing this... })({ ~Adreana

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