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~Nothing to say, to do~
Contributed by
Dazzle
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Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Leave me in the cold rain
Leave me in the high sun
Leave me in pain
Never come back
Time flies just pass you by
Like sand
Like water
Like anything
When you close your eyes
To think about yesterday
It's best you don't look back
The grass is always greener on the other side
Can't do anything
Nothing to hope
Just keep on dreaming
For the tomorrow that's so blue
Copyright ©
Dazzle
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2003-06-18 17:05:00]
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Re: ~Nothing to say, to do~
(User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 06:51:21 PM AEST
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| I like this, especially JUST KEEP ON DREAMING, FOR THE TOMORROW THAT'S SO BLUE that's good, keep on dreaming Mofei! luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: ~Nothing to say, to do~
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by UnleashedFuture on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 08:03:19 PM AEST
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| Referring back to the last poem I just read of yours. You seem to be saying that the future holds something. The future is right in front of you now. Tomorrow will never come if that's the way it's viewed. Always on the horizon out of sight. |
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