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gah
Contributed by
herecomesthesun
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Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i opened my eyes and found my ear next to a green seashell. echoing the sounds of silence back to me. my heart was sleepy, and my tounge had no color to it. seems time to eat a blue popsicle. my feet ache from trying to stand above you. or to at least see eye to eye. under your nose is where i always stayed. and here i am now. flat on the ground. face down. waitng for the grass to grow over me. then my momma tells me its time to eat. lord how i hate you.
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Re: gah
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 06:31:09 PM AEST
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| this is really good... thanks for sharing! |
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Re: gah
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by shelby on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:42:56 AM AEST
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a great poem with a twist.
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Re: gah
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by vincy on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 06:49:33 PM AEST
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poem makes emotional impact, there's talent here.
"waitng for the grass to grow over me", terrific line. |
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