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B R E A T H E
Contributed by
vincy
on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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When I came to this world
nobody told me to breathe
I just took a breath
all on my own
or
did the breathe take me?
I have journeyed this life
for half a century now
taking a breath in
then letting it out.
I still have much doubt
if I shall leave the breath
or
the breathe shall leave me?
What I have so far witnessed
In this journey of life
has driven me
to the expression of the absurd,
not only have I learned
to laugh at things
but take delight
in playing the fool.
I cherish humility
as evidence
of my humanity.
Copyright ©
vincy
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2003-06-17 17:05:00]
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Re: B R E A T H E
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 05:38:48 PM AEST
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"or did the breathe take me?"
Excellent!!! I'm very impressed!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: B R E A T H E
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 07:25:49 PM AEST
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very profound
Shari |
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Re: B R E A T H E
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by joni553 on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 10:52:07 AM AEST
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| very interesting point of view. I like it! |
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Re: B R E A T H E
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by Purple_Cherry on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:52:59 AM AEST
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Hopefully you shall leave the breath. It's much more peaceful that way. The poem is very thoughtful. Humility is proof of humanity. If only more people would think so.
~Cherry |
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