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Should I?
Contributed by
jaima
on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I feel no shame for what I am,
I'm not in denial that I'm sad,
Lest I don't pretend...
I maybe a failure to you,
I may not be so called normal,
But lest to myself I am true.
Copyright ©
jaima
... [
2003-06-17 13:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Should I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 03:45:53 AM AEST (User
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The trouble with life's journey is you can't trust the signposts |
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Re: Should I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaima on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 09:00:50 AM AEST (User
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mm..i know... |
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Re: Should I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by redrum33 on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 12:31:25 AM AEST (User
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you call that a poem? thats garbage. |
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Re: Should I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nsa on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 07:20:50 PM AEST (User
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Oooh....Not bad, maybe you should try making longer poems though, although some of mine are that short. But that is a good poem |
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Re: Should I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaima on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 07:17:08 AM AEST (User
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well if that's what you think..but maybe you should look at your own writeing before you start to pick on others.. |
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Re: Should I?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jaima on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 07:29:56 AM AEST (User
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well this is my shortest ever poem..and none of them again..are that short...soo yeh |
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