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A SIngle Rose
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Walking through the graveyard
Finding some old friends
Most were killed by accidents
Some made their own lives end,
As the storm begins to build
I wander among the dead
Looking at the gravestones
Wondering what lies ahead,
It starts to rain
Then pours down
The lightening flashed
My smile turns to a frown,
I kneal next to the deserted stone
Brushing back twigs and tall grass
I wait for more lightening
to read the name atlast,
While feeling sorry for the baren stone
The sky fills with light
With no shock of the true name
I rest by the stone for the night,
I place a single rose on the grave
Revisiting one's death
They've gotten what they'd wanted
Not life - Eternal rest,
Ive gotten what I knew was true
No one cared at any time
Holding on to my own single rose
Knowing that the grave is mine.
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Re: A SIngle Rose
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:32:15 AM AEST
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This is beautiful poem, had so much sorrow pain weaved into the words, it is very well done.
I liked this poem, reminds me of my life, ruled by darkness, swallowed by light.
Keep up the poetry, you are obvisually good at it. |
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Re: A SIngle Rose
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 10:42:37 AM AEST
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oh this is beautiful and sad at the same time. I have spent many hours placing flowers in the cemetary. To many of my friends resting there. This brought back memories.
Michelle |
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Re: A SIngle Rose
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by norm on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 11:17:30 AM AEST
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the poem's construction is good...
Do not use the grave before your time
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Re: A SIngle Rose
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:04:17 PM AEST
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Good to see you back I enjoyed this as I love all of your poems. Hope to see more from you soon. Keep it up. Very good imagery.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: A SIngle Rose
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 03:50:56 PM AEST
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| Real sad,but I see where your going with this write! Great piece! Christina |
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Re: A SIngle Rose
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by DreamCatcher on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 04:57:52 PM AEST
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| It's a great peom, but life should not be wasted. Live life for all it's worth. |
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Re: A SIngle Rose
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by Enfuego on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 12:12:23 AM AEST
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| Nice work, I really like it! |
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Re: A SIngle Rose
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by Daydreamer on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 01:52:34 AM AEST
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| I understand where you are going with this write. i enjoyed it. It was a very good write filled with much pain and sorrow. I have contemplated puting myself in an early grave but I can't stand to be alone. I have thought about it the way you describe it in your poem. It was very touching. Great write. ~Day~ |
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Re: A SIngle Rose
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by Kirby on
Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 05:55:33 PM AEST
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| Yeah I liked the end the best! The rest of the poem was great too! Love:::Kirby |
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