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meant
Contributed by
wil_ca
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Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
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it hurts, and i wish it was but a dream
to wake up and be overcome with relief
sometimes i wonder if its all real
sometimes i wish i could wish away all that i feel
times when it feels like im never going to make it
things wont get better
like im meant to fail
meant to be less than anyone would want
i know ive made mistakes
but is this the way things are supposed to go
when i die, will i open my hands and have nothing to show
2nd rate......
is this my fate?
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Re: meant
(User Rating: 1 ) by garyh on
Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 01:07:00 AM AEST (User
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nicely written |
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Re: meant
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 05:44:20 PM AEST (User
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i feel as if i'm meant for the same fate...if only waking up solved it all...and wishing did too...
great poem
please comment on my work too
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