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Three Words
Contributed by
bopeep
on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Three words.
That beat me down.
Three words.
That keep me down.
With these words.
I'll stop the pain.
With these words.
I'll send the pain.
Three words.
All I can say.
Three words.
All I wish to say.
With these words.
I'll free myself.
With these words.
I'll kill myself.
Three words.
Nothing more to say.
Three words.
Do you have anything to say?
With these words.
I'll stop the screaming.
With these words.
I'll stop the bleeding.
Three words.
That's all you say.
Three words.
All I know to say.
These three words:
I
HATE
YOU
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2003-06-17 06:05:00]
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Re: Three Words
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 02:48:38 PM AEST
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Wow this was very emotional I like the build-up and the anger you portray.
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Re: Three Words
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by MX on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 04:07:32 PM AEST
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man...that was amazing.
i love the build up of emotion.
very very well written.
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Re: Three Words
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by frozensuicide on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:37:21 PM AEST
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| ooh@ i knew it! im cool! good write, lotta anger, go you! kick ass! |
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Re: Three Words
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by frozensuicide on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:37:28 PM AEST
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| ooh@ i knew it! im cool! good write, lotta anger, go you! kick ass! |
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