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~Demons Of Hell~
Contributed by
Dazzle
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Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Come now
Demons of Hell
Catch me now
I'll fall into your hands
Your claws of Death
I'm not afraid
Come now
I want to go
I'm frozen cold
Come now
Demons of Hell
If only I knew
A road from Heaven to Hell
I would go
Because there's no one to love me
When I need it
There's no one to hug me
When it's coming
At least
In Hell
It's warm enough to feel some
Comfort
Come now
Demons of Hell
Copyright ©
Dazzle
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2003-06-16 23:05:00]
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Re: ~Demons Of Hell~
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by BlackFire9786 on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 11:18:56 PM AEST
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| Aw, great write, although hell isn't the place to go if u want heat, hawaii might be better ;) lol, seriously tho, i hope you find some comfort, everyone should be loved. I love you!! hehe, luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: ~Demons Of Hell~
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 02:03:49 AM AEST
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I must agree with Lisa a tropical island sounds much better nice write just the same. If you want some heat without hell just come on to the desert you'll be cookin, lol
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Re: ~Demons Of Hell~
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 02:21:53 AM AEST
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Very sad but good writing!
I'm sure we've all wondered from time to time.
To find heaven u just need to believe that Jesus Christ is the son of God.
If we had to find the road to heaven on our own we'd never get there. Jesus died and rose again to let us know that he knows how it is. Believe that's all God expects.
emystar@msn.com
I can certainly understand how any one can feel this way at times.
Luv,
emy |
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Re: ~Demons Of Hell~
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:45:26 AM AEST
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| excellent poem, but you dont to find the path to hell, if you screw up it will find you, (JOKE)nah you done well with this poem,really liked this one, can see by reading this poem what is in your heart. |
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Re: ~Demons Of Hell~
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 03:04:44 PM AEST
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this was good for future poems try and spice them up a bit more with more descriptive language. Get a thesaurus their helpful. Well written poem nonetheless.
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