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Untitled-6
Contributed by
UnleashedFuture
on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Please don't love me yet,
I don't think I'm ready to
give that in return,
Just stay close to me,
When it's time I want you
to be the one,
It's not fair to ask,
What's left inside isn't
enough for two,
Just be my friend,
It's what I really need
now to help me through,
My heart is shattered,
When the pieces come
back there'll be space
for you,
Just don't love me yet,
But don't leave me to
do this on my own.
Copyright ©
UnleashedFuture
... [
2003-06-16 09:05:00]
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Re: Untitled-6
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by norm on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 10:19:59 AM AEST
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the poem really tests love...
very well constructed... |
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Re: Untitled-6
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by Dazzle on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 09:58:09 PM AEST
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I love the lines, very emotional! It sounds so nice......That's all.
*Be Happy:Dazzle* |
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Re: Untitled-6
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th June 2003 @ 08:03:49 AM AEST
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| its too late .. I will always love you & am here for you, never leaving your side. Great job ! |
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Re: Untitled-6
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by papajfat on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:52:55 AM AEST
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I got some feedback you might need....
get some titles.
Oh, and better poetry might help too.
This is not a dis, it's just that crap like this can only lead to one thing.....
more crap. |
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