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i'll never be
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i'll never be popular
i'll never be cool
i'll just be the psycho
who shoots up the school
i'll never be athletic
i'll never be cute
i'll just be fat and ugly
with a *****ty attitude to boot
i'll never be a lawyer
or a doctor in the ER
i'll be the one the doctor operates on
sewing up my wrists bleeding scars
i'm sorry mom, i'm sorry dad
but i'll never be what you want me to be
i hope that you can understand
i'm always just gonna be me
i'll never be a scientist
who cures AIDS or cancer
i'll be the terrorist, the militia leader
trying to end the world a little faster
i'll never be normal, i'll never be stable
i'll never be what you planned out for me
i'll probably just end up dead or insane
or in a penitentiary
i'll never be happy, or well-adjusted
but that doesn't bother me
just two more things to add to the list
of the ***** i'll never be
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Cancer
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2003-06-16 01:05:00]
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Re: i'll never be
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 12:14:26 PM AEST
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This is amazing, it really is.
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Re: i'll never be
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by mystical_illusion on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 03:15:43 PM AEST
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I liked your poem, especially the second last verse. Thanks for sharing,
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Re: i'll never be
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 10:10:39 AM AEST
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A shadowing darkness in your poetry seems to flow within your words, you certainly have a way in which you portray what you are feeling to everyone who reads your work. I have read a little of your work, but from what I have seen it is very good in a dark sort of way.
Look forward to more. |
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Re: i'll never be
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:32:39 AM AEST
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this is pure undilated ***** in its crystalline form. No watered down bacteria here. Don't ever stop writing the world would lose something great.
Bobo (Joel) |
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