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Silence my eyes
Contributed by
vincy
on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have been up and down
and sideways too
have travelled circle like
almost like an egg.
Have gone in and out
flip and flop.
I have been through
the dire straights
so many times now
I might as well
descend
into a silence
only you
can see me through
or...
silence my eyes.
Copyright ©
vincy
... [
2003-06-15 12:05:00]
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Re: Silence my eyes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:31:48 PM AEST
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Nice write!!
Jenni |
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Re: Silence my eyes
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by venkat on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 03:36:15 AM AEST
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| very cute.. venkat |
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Re: Silence my eyes
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by Jaima on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 06:02:55 AM AEST
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| why does this other person have to help you though? why can't you make the journey on your own? good poem thou..*smiles* |
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Re: Silence my eyes
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by vincy on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 10:59:48 AM AEST
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cause I've been talking to mysef.
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