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I Take A Hit
Contributed by
Anglea
on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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It's dark as night,
I take a hit.
Thoughts swarm my mind like a violent storm.
I can't strike back that would only make things worse.
Happiness lost,
only tourment can be found.
Deep within me there was a dream,
what it was I have forgotten.
Minds a mess as I take another hit,
only heartache reamains within reach.
Can't get out of this slump.
Words of loved ones ring upon my ears as I take another hit,
There's no way out, my minds now a blurr.
I take another hit,
Constant ticking of the clock where will I arrive, Heaven or Hell?
I've done a lot of foolish things in my life,
but please have mercy on my soul.
Useless decision as I take another hit.
This life...is this where it ends or does it just begin?
I live in this deep black hole where not even I can save my soul.
Another hit,
not one person can help my insane life.
Tired and alone with no one to hear me,
still I sacrifice for if it's not me then my children it will be.
Still another hit,
the end feels near.
Time.....Time...ticks loudly in my ears.
Yet another hit and I have fallen lifeless to the floor.
Can not move,
can not shout.
I lie there motionless until I die tearfully.
Copyright ©
Anglea
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2003-06-15 11:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Take A Hit
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 08:12:42 PM AEST (User
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sad but great write |
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