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Advice
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Advice
To any who would travel here
In search of my heart
Smiles it’s too late friend
I must depart
But if you’re of a mind
If you’re willing to heed advice
Take time to read this poem
A couple minutes will suffice
If one day love should grace your heart
Turn your world inside out
Grasp it with all your might
Pursue it without doubt
For love is a majestic thing
Wonderful to behold
But also can be fleeting
Perhaps not long yours to hold
So when it touches you
Grab hold and let your spirit fly
Allow your heart to touch the fire
Don’t over think or reason why
And when the day comes
Love has gone away
After the tears have all fallen
Smile and say
“ We explored the heights of heaven “
“ With happy and joyful hearts “
“ Discovered loneliness has an end “
“And love never departs “ !
Russ
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Lone_er
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Re: Advice
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by vincy on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 11:52:07 AM AEST
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" Don’t over think or reason why "
this line says it all, the mind and the heart
seldom occupy the same space. |
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Re: Advice
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:06:23 PM AEST
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Russ..another awesme write; one with which I agree.. I believe it is better to have loved and lost to never have known a love at all.. after all, love is what keeps me alive...
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Jenni |
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Re: Advice
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 02:48:58 PM AEST
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another wonderful and meaningful write
Shari |
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Re: Advice
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by shelby on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:02:54 PM AEST
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Russ your poetry is beautiful. You move me with your words. Lovely.
Michelle |
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Re: Advice
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 12:03:55 AM AEST
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| Advice well said here in this write! Russ your work always gets to me! Great work!Christina |
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