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whispers of the night
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You speak through the whispers of the night,
Mumbling to me how I have failed,
You tell me to use all my might,
To use the knife…again…harder then before.
Part of what you say is so right,
I have been all those evil things,
I try not to, but I am despite,
And I know what I must do,
Slit my wrists before first light
This time I won’t survive
You whisper “hurry, this will make it all right”
As my blood pours out ~ dark red,
My skin turns to a pale ghost white
As I lay dying I look for you,
But conveniently you’re out of sight,
I die alone ~ finally the voices are gone.
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2003-06-15 07:05:00]
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Re: whispers of the night
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by Cancer on
Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 02:05:40 PM AEST
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sad, yet hopeful. a soft whisper of insanity. i liked it. by the way, if this was a little longer, it would make a bad ass song.
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Re: whispers of the night
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:47:11 PM AEST
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| awww so sadly vivid, you have captured last moments of breath, much big love and hugs, always nessa x |
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