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Dew Mingling
Contributed by
wordsmith
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Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Dew Mingling
Dew Mingling
On a spider’s web
Clutching
Winter’s fatal wind
Copyright ©
wordsmith
... [
2003-06-14 23:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dew Mingling
(User Rating: 1 ) by norm on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 10:10:22 AM AEST (User
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Sounds good to me but I'm no Haiku expert
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Re: Dew Mingling
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dragons_Of_Rose on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 05:28:38 PM AEST (User
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This is good, but not haiku format. Format is 5-7-5 |
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