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A Troubled Teen
Contributed by
Desi
on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She lays lifeless on the bathroom floor.
The blood flows from her wrists, like a river.
It turns the carpet the color of the setting sun.
No one knows why she did it, maybe life was to hard, maybe there were untold secrets. Now, I guess we'll never know.
People knew she was a loner, though no one seemed to care. When some one tried to get close, she pushed them away. Was she scared of people? Was she untrusting? If so, why?
Was it because her parents mistreated her and left her home? Was it because her brother molested her? Was it because she had no friends and feared the dark?
You don't know, neither do I. I just know what I read in her diary. Don't ask how I came across it, but believe what I tell you.
"No one will miss me." she thought. "no one will care." She was wrong. Nearly the entire high school show to her funeral, leaving flowers, saying prayers.
But I just stood there, feeling dazed and confused. Unable to cry. I miss her already, but she will never know.
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Desi
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2003-06-14 14:05:00]
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Re: A Troubled Teen
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by desertwispers on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 02:27:19 PM AEST
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so very sad. sorry this happened. you expressed great emotion here. if you need to talk pm me.
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Re: A Troubled Teen
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 06:12:03 PM AEST
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this gave me goose bumps... wow this was so realisitic... kudos... if you need to talk PM me I'll always be there to listen
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Re: A Troubled Teen
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 09:18:29 PM AEST
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very well written, a tragedy, you conveyed the feeling so well...You may also pm me if you need to talk
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Re: A Troubled Teen
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by Eloise on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:45:31 AM AEST
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| such a beautiful yet tragic poem... good write |
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Re: A Troubled Teen
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by hardcoreputa on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 01:56:53 AM AEST
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| yet another person offering to help... just pm me if u want to talk... a very touching poem and i know it can be hard to go through... u did a great job of expressing your pain in this poem... ~Apryl |
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Re: A Troubled Teen
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by Trisha on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 04:18:51 PM AEST
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| Wow This really put a frown on someone face to think what people really do behide the closed doors? |
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