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The Story Of Us
Contributed by
firestorm12wife
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Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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When we started dating,
things seemed like a dream.
No thoughts of us hateing,
and nothing to redeem.
Then one year later,
we took our vows.
Nothing could be greater.
We both were aroused.
Five months had past by,
and our problems got bigger.
We were not sure why,
But his temper was like a trigger.
For years we tried,
to sourt out his past,
and to get him to confide.
Before the trigger released the blast.
Unable to hold on to love,
we find ourself today.
Fighting like we never dreamed of,
and hopeing it will go away.
The friendship we shared,
will never be forgoten.
The hurt needs repaired,
so comunications will not go rotten.
Copyright ©
firestorm12wife
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2003-06-14 12:45:00]
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Re: The Story Of Us
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 01:13:05 PM AEST
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Except for a few spelling errore, I think this is a good poem.... Welcome to ypdc..
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Re: The Story Of Us
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by norm on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 01:27:39 PM AEST
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all that jenni wrote is so..
a wee bit more practice..
you'll be in there with the girls
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Re: The Story Of Us
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 01:27:57 PM AEST
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I agree with Jenni..good work
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