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She Cries With Me
Contributed by
Stalkee
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Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 09:25:00 AM in AEST
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Sometimes I feel like nobody cares for me
Sometimes I feel like I don't have a friend
And right now I'm feeling all alone
But at least I have nature,
the places she loves me
Confused, lost, and scared as I am
She's always there to cry with me
Well I walk through the woods 'cause,
Mother Nature always comforts me
I climb up on her hills and listen to nothing
When I'm feeling all alone,
She kisses me with her breeze,
so I'll feel a little better
And in my dark hours, she cries with me
I used to believe that there's nobody out there
That could pick me up when I'm feeling blue
And say that they loved me too and I still beleive it
But when I'm having trouble all through my life,
She gets me thinking and writing these poems
She opens the door for me, tries to get rid of my pain
After all she has done for me, I'll cry with her too
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Stalkee
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Re: She Cries With Me
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by shelby on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 01:34:36 PM AEST
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abeautiful poem. Nature and all her wonders does fill the heart with comfort. I hope your not feeling so lonely.
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Re: She Cries With Me
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 01:42:17 PM AEST
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For me it is the water being by the lake soothes me,, great write,,maybe you can add something to my group write on nature
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Re: She Cries With Me
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:07:10 AM AEST
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This is beautiful! I love it!! I'm a huge nature freak, nothing soothes me like even just a few minutes spent with nature, so I really appreciate this! It's so true, she's always there for you... in one form or another. :) Excellent write!
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Re: She Cries With Me
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by wordsmith on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:02:36 PM AEST
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| Very nice! You have a great message and beautiful lines. We can share your journey. |
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