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Why Do I Cry?
Contributed by
Sarina
on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In my hands all have bled,
in my hands one more has bled,
but why do i cry?
Blood is flowing through his shirt,
i have stabbed him in his heart,
but why do i cry?
His Peachy face and warm lips,
are turning pale and cold,
His Golden eyes,
are turning black,
his manly hands,
are turning weak and frail,
but why do i cry?
Now, I have seen the light... I love him,
i love his manly hands and peachy face,
i love his warm lips and golden eyes,
so i cry... i cry for love
Copyright ©
Sarina
... [
2003-06-13 18:05:00]
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Re: Why Do I Cry?
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 08:12:54 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write Sarina!! :) |
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Re: Why Do I Cry?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 08:42:15 PM AEST
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Nicely done! Metaphor or not. This is a lovely
write.
Angel always...godspeed......joni |
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Re: Why Do I Cry?
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 09:06:19 PM AEST
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very good write
Shari |
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Re: Why Do I Cry?
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:30:03 PM AEST
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| awwww! |
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Re: Why Do I Cry?
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 01:47:25 AM AEST
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| Hey I like this but it's wrong. |
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Re: Why Do I Cry?
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by norm on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 04:31:28 PM AEST
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you write very well
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i've had no experience in the
contents of the poem...
I can't even understand the
metaphor...I glad
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