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I'd Like
Contributed by
Goebelclm73
on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 09:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I have a proposal for you
So please just hear me out
Let me be plain, but clear
So you're left with little doubt
It's actually very simple
And I'm sure that you can see
Why many things about you
Have suddenly captured me
I'm impressed with your style
And the way you walk with grace
That smile you hold so well
Upon your beautiful face
It's in the tone of your voice
And how you sound so sweet
It's every time I'm near you
My heart picks up the beat
It's many other things
But let me say this now
I'd like to get to know you better
Somewhere, sometime, somehow!
Copyright ©
Goebelclm73
... [
2003-06-13 09:25:00]
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Re: I'd Like
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by norm on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:23:08 AM AEST
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I like your style
that you can smile
this poem i'll file
the poem has no guile.
It's sweet and fresh for July
the girl that you want should comply
The marriage is soon.
11 month up to June
you can kiss and woo on the fly...
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Re: I'd Like
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 02:30:02 PM AEST
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| very good write, and yes you should have showed her |
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