|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Sweet Surrender, Tender Misery
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
The rain drops paint our story, as you wipe away my tears,
I’ll kiss your soul, and throw away my deepest fears,
Sweetest surrender, the most tender of misery,
Now I can see this, my light in the dark shroud of mystery,
You are my heart, the very essence of my being,
And your very touch becomes my ecstasy...
I wont fear this, I wont fear love,
I’ll take it by the reigns, and ride it like a wild wind,
Soaring with the eagles, within the heavens above,
Where there is no end,
The horizon of two souls made to one, simply leads to eternity,
And it’s there that you’ll find me...
The beautiful release, the flooding of a sea,
Riding this wave of ecstasy from within me,
In this sweet surrender, the most tender of misery,
It’s now that we can see this most, we’re each other's light,
In this life, a shrouded mystery...
Copyright ©
ravenblack_phoenix
... [
2003-06-13 02:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Sweet Surrender, Tender Misery
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 03:50:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow! A wonderful creative romantic poetry. Love this one pal. |
|
|
Re: Sweet Surrender, Tender Misery
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 03:53:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Love this - wonderful poetry ... beautifully written ... Jan |
|
|
Re: Sweet Surrender, Tender Misery
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 05:40:46 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oh my gosh this is simply fantastic. Phenomenal!! I'm so jealous!! :P
~ Moonlit |
|
|
Re: Sweet Surrender, Tender Misery
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:57:32 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very beautiful and moving, this one touched me deeply:) hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: Sweet Surrender, Tender Misery
(User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 04:43:22 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wow...simply fascinataing! Loved it as always! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
