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self-destruct
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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in a world of constant pain
i muddle through the ***** to gain
a crown of thorns, a throne of bones
a kingdom where i rot, alone
all helping hands broken
pleas for help, left unspoken
inward will my rage erupt
come in and watch me self-destruct
in a castle of regret
down the halls of mistakes
flanked with blurred portraits
of each smile that i faked
past the suicidal jesters
and my dead queen on her throne
you'll find a wall, where there was once a door
inside, i die alone
my isolation chamber
built from fear of reality
my defense against the world
a welcome mat for insanity
inside, i chat with jesus
and the suicidal messiah doth instruct
me on the proper way
to correctly self-destruct
so come on in, don't mind the broken dreams
littered about the floor
sup from my dish, drink from my chalice
i don't need them anymore
if you find me too self-pitying
i don't really give a *****
you can go away, but if you stay,
i'll show you the proper way
to implode and self-destruct
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-06-12 20:05:00]
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Re: self-destruct
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by BlackFire9786 on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:25:21 PM AEST
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| wow, this is quite a poem, the pain and lonliness so evident, i loved it! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: self-destruct
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:53:16 PM AEST
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Dark cold heartless, this has it all, the excessive pain, beautifully written, you have a masterful way of self expression.
Loved this poem, keep it up. |
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Re: self-destruct
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 05:12:48 AM AEST
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"don't mind the broken dreams" - love it!
Excellent!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: self-destruct
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by M on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 10:07:01 AM AEST
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This is so amazing. I have no words.
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Re: self-destruct
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 02:59:38 PM AEST
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this is stunning tottally captivating... I'd say more but I have to read it again.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: self-destruct
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by Saira on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 05:10:53 PM AEST
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| Such rage, pain and lonliness....amazing! It's a very well written poem. I like it a lot. |
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Re: self-destruct
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by deadly_blaZe on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 06:47:16 PM AEST
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this was the sh*t! 'all helping hands broken..' i loved it
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