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And So Here it Ends
Contributed by
stargazer
on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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We are making that final walk,
the walk towards a new life, towards a new us.
The music is playing loudly,
loud enough to overcome all of our wild thoughts,
and crazy plans for after.
But the music ends.
And so does the walk.
So the walk ends,
and so do we.
Copyright ©
stargazer
... [
2003-06-12 16:05:00]
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Re: And So Here it Ends
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 01:13:50 AM AEST
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| your poem is very beautiful to me, and has greatly moved me........ hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: And So Here it Ends
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by DreamCatcher on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:06:04 AM AEST
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Moving, and sad. tragic, but sometimes the truth. Goodbyes always hurt.
Sarah Bakura |
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Re: And So Here it Ends
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by Goebelclm73 on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 02:40:27 AM AEST
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There's nothing easy about goodbye, especially when it crys from the heart!!
Very good write!!
Christopher
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