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Not Me
Contributed by
savannah
on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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You need a breathless beauty
A southern belle
Daddy's Little Girl
Not me
You need someone you can take care of
A crying angel
A wounded bird
Not me
You need a beach baby
A natural blonde
A tan complexion
Not me
You need a social butterfly
A quick smile
Everbody's Best Friend
Not me
You need a high tinkling laugh
A sparkling eye
A no worries girl
Not me
You need someone who needs you
A girl who can stay dedicated to you
Not someone who changes her mind easily
And not me
You need someone who wants you
A girl who misses you for more than a week
Not someone who wants another
And not me
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savannah
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2003-06-12 15:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Not Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by MX on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 05:07:31 PM AEST (User
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i've felt like this before about a b/f...but i was never able to tell them this....very well written.
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Re: Not Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:11:04 PM AEST (User
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very honest and a very good write
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Re: Not Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by stargazer on
Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 12:09:08 PM AEST (User
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I've felt like this before and it seems that you captured all my thoughts in this poem. It was hard knowing that I wasn't what he was looking for. Very nicely done.
-Amy |
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