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Angel of God
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I stand at the river’s edge
Trying to see into the deep.
The sky starts to cloud over
And snowflakes fall all around me.
I see my reflection, just a dark shadow
Surrounded in a world of white
A powerful surge of sadness over comes me
Why can’t I be part of this beautiful life?
Tears start to drop from my eyes
My eyelashes covered in frozen tears
When I feel a hand on my shoulder
And it takes away my fears
I turn to see a woman
More likely an angel of God.
In a flowing white dress, a flower crown on her head
And she leaves no mark where she’s trod.
She puts her hands on my face
Wipes away the moisture.
With the tears she wipes away
Within me the montser.
I fall to my knees, cry now pure tears
Tears not tainted with my hate.
When I look back up she isn’t there
I must’ve looked up too late
For I didn’t see the transformation
Didn’t see her turn.
But now instead of an angel of God
I see a beautiful white unicorn.
It’s muzzle touches my forehead
Then lifts up my chin
When I look in its eyes
I see heaven within.
It starts to gallop to the edge of the forest
It looks back as it gets to the trees.
Though I’ll never truly touch that unicorn,
I’ll forever see it in my dreams.
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BlackFire9786
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2003-06-12 08:45:00]
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Re: Angel of God
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:50:52 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful!! I love the legend of the unicorn...and I love this poem...
Jenni |
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Re: Angel of God
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:57:42 AM AEST
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breathtaking,
Shari |
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Re: Angel of God
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 10:05:09 AM AEST
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awesome write lisa...i too love the legend of the unicorn. :) i love your imagery in this poem...i can picture it so perfectly...it's beautiful.
your twin,
~*riki lynn*~
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Re: Angel of God
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 10:50:35 AM AEST
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A very enjoyable read, lots of great visuals!!
Well done! Larry :o) |
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