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felo-de-se intersection
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
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the intersections of life almost ended me
now there is something i want you to see
life as we know, has its ups and downs
but im here to say its worth sticking around
the pain that you feel, i know is all too real
right now your not living with any kind of zeal
i will not say, to stay here it is your duty
but you will surely miss out on so much beauty
how will you ever truely know all seasons
when to the world you give these reasons
great things that seem so very far away
will truely come to you on another day
i once was exactly right where you are
and i don't mean the accident in the car
life is a precious gift, i know this today
and i wouldn't live it any other way
no matter your age life can make you sad
its not 'cause your young, old, good or bad
have you ever stopped to wonder this;
out there is someone that what you have they so wish
that they too could walk, sing, write, hear, see, speak
but they cannot for their bodies are weak
some people are hanging on by a thread
but the last thing they want is to be dead
it is worth the wait to see a pink sunset
from someone special, that hugg you will get
the song of the birds singing how life is sweet
many memories you can make and always keep
life is funny how it changes so quickly
it needs not your hand to end it, so much yet to see
for after every fall there is an inevitable climb
no matter whats happened; believe me life can be sublime
death may seem romantic; surely then all will know
that you hated your life and wanted to go
but think about after, what will it be?
what if there's something you now do not see?
what if you had to live your life again all over?
and there wasn't pleasures, like things you now know
consider these things before taking deaths quick kiss
...could be true about karma and conscienceness...
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
oldengmastiff@hotmail.com
anytime
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Re: felo-de-se intersection
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:40:02 AM AEST
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Awww Ness..(((((HUGS)))))) There are so many suicidal people out there these days.. I hope they read this and take heed. This is so very touching especially after our talk last evening....
I think it is one of your best writes ever..
Luv ya, grrl...
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:02:26 AM AEST
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this is truly one of your best I agree w/ Jenni
your message is very important..I on more than one occasion myself thought of taking my life...but truly there is too much I would have missed.
Shari |
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by venkat on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 10:07:48 AM AEST
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| Truth you have spoken..very beautiful in highlighting the fact.. thank you for sharing it.. you are very kind.. venkat |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 10:39:07 AM AEST
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I agree with you completely Nessa. One true and honest smile takes away the pain of a thousand frowns. I hope our friends who are on the edge read this and take your most eloquent words to heart. Very well done my friend.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 10:44:37 AM AEST
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well, you sure do have a way with words and you have certainly made me wonder
Thank you nessa, you truly are a wonderful woman, Thanks to your....words i will be staying for a while yet
Great write as always :)
Your Friend
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Re: felo-de-se intersection
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by M on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 11:04:10 AM AEST
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You have made me cry here! Thank you so much, it really made me think, and i'm sure it's done the same to others. This is a beautiful poem, with such an important message, one that often i don't see.
Thank you for sharing this one.
Emily
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 11:09:55 AM AEST
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Your spirit shines through this one,Nessa...
Truly your message will get through!!!
Good to see your hand still pens beauty!!!!
:-) :-) :-) Angel always :-) :-) :-)
joni 0:-) |
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by knowWhat_kind on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:14:22 PM AEST
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| I don't know really what to say did you really feel this way. A person in my family triend to kill his self,but he told somebody so he is still here today. Great writting though. |
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:21:34 PM AEST
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| another great write with a great message. thanks for sharing this one, i think i may hang around for a bit longer =) |
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by hardcoreputa on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:54:43 PM AEST
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| a truely great poem, it really makes me think what would happen if i eventually succedded... i wish one day that i too can reach a point where i feel as you do. also i heard about the car crash and i just wanted to give u best wishes... this was very insperational and i think i will have to tell many of my friends to read it thanx for sharing such a touching personal poem ~Apryl |
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 02:11:09 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, thank you so much for sharing.. how true this is...
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by Saira on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 03:12:22 PM AEST
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| Such strength in your words...full of truth....very heart touching....you have covered almost everything quite perfectly in your well written poem...thanks for sharing it with us Nessa. |
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by MX on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 05:18:34 PM AEST
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good lord...that was simply amazing...i know there are so many people out there thinking about committing suicide(i happen to be one of them) and that poem definitely makes you think twice about throwing it all away.
-MX- |
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:02:03 PM AEST
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| Nothing will ever dampen your spirit Nessa ... you always shine, even through tragic circumstances ... you are a unique soul touching many hearts (mine included) :))))) Jan |
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by roisin on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:18:55 PM AEST
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An exceptional write...one that has caused a few to stop and think.Your love of life and your great spirit have spoken volumes here.Tis a wonderful gift you have Nessa. Ta for sharing.
rosie |
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by norm on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 07:10:30 PM AEST
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I am older than most people on this site.
I would not have given up a day of my life
and now..I'll fight for every new one.
This rendition of your thinking is inspiring.
Go, ye who would kill yourself..learn from
nessa who loves life and those around her.
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Re: felo-de-se intersection
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by shelby on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 10:56:47 PM AEST
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Nessa this is a great poem. I know that this has touched all who have read it. Your heart is so full of love.
Love ya Michelle |
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Re: felo-de-se intersection
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by Bongo on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 10:51:50 AM AEST
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Your poetry
Thoughtful explanitory
Missing it, could i dread
Glad i'm not dead.
This is a subject that all of us would think about some time in our life and your version is nicely written ness. |
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 08:34:01 AM AEST
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| oh nessa...this is so, so beautiful...when i reached the 4th stanza i started crying and i was shaking...this has touched somewhere deep inside of me...i just...wow... |
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by princesspurty on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 03:41:41 PM AEST
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| a perfect write, sad but very well put |
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 03:10:40 PM AEST
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Hear hear nessa . I'm nearing 80 now wake each morning and smile. I've been gikven yet another day to enjoy
I had a death experience when I was a pilot in the RAF facing the inevitable crash the body just switched off everything. The screen went blank.
Thats kind in a way. Your soul could not keep carrying life after life aftter life |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 10:50:54 PM AEST
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| My dear friend, only one who has been there can truly express as you have. So glad you are here to help us all and chose the right path for yourself, in helping us who feel despair and hopelessness. You have overcome, we can too!! Love. |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 10:51:31 PM AEST
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| My dear friend, only one who has been there can truly express as you have. So glad you are here to help us all and chose the right path for yourself, in helping us who feel despair and hopelessness. You have overcome, we can too!! Love Catsid |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 10:51:33 PM AEST
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| My dear friend, only one who has been there can truly express as you have. So glad you are here to help us all and chose the right path for yourself, in helping us who feel despair and hopelessness. You have overcome, we can too!! Love Catsid |
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by Angelic_Demon on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 06:37:05 PM AEST
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Hey... Good. Hopefully this'll make some people think.. um.. can't think of anything else to say. -_-
Love ya, mom. Great write.
Mars |
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by Angelic_Demon on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 06:37:29 PM AEST
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Hey... Good. Hopefully this'll make some people think...
Love ya, mom. Great write.
Mars |
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 02:04:05 PM AEST
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| please please please publish this... this is brilliant... i have been here too and now feel as you do... this poem needs to be hung up for all to see... excellent, nessa... just excellent... blessings... michele |
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 04:50:41 AM AEST
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Thank you for posting this, and it took me a long time to find it, one month. But as I sit here now, it was worth the wait. You see, I never knew what stayed my hand, all four times. I never knew why I couldn't go through... but now I do. Your poem has shown me that it was because I couldn't risk losing out because I gave up. And I cry now as I realize it. My fighter's spirit saved my life. Thank you again, for posting this poem. Thank you for having the inspiration to write this. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart.
*J* |
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by karoody on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 12:50:37 PM AEST
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very beautifully written and well thought...you are an amazing woman...and well...my fav poem of yours...gee, hard to narrow down and my list won't fit here....
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by forever_lonely on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 08:28:00 PM AEST
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Wish i had read that about 2 years ago, then the thoughts would have never crossed my mind and i wouldnt have stood there with a knife in hand thinking of it, but just didnt have the guts, a blessing in disguise i know now.
A truely remarkable write full of compassion and emotion the way poetry should be, a masterpiece of time this is without question
Luke x |
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:57:12 PM AEST
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Nessa you should resubmit this. HOw did I miss this deeply touching poem that could help so many?
Please for me, just this once re-submit this.
It is a classic that so many would love to read.
Kie |
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:46:10 PM AEST
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Such an insprational message for those who have tried and those who are now thinking of it. You are a master of words. May your writes contiune to inspire. All who read.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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by Munchkin on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 04:06:30 PM AEST
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| i often think about suicide and wanting to commit it, and i have to disagree that the poem helps. it just raises more questions in an already unsettled mind. questions like "how do you know life is worth it?" "are the memories ever gonna be good ones? if not then why bother making any?" "should i really stick around and make everyone else sad just so i can be happy for a little while?" and "just because you're happy doesn't mean i will ever be, is it really worth it?" it is a great poem, but to everyone that thinks it helps: your pro'ly living a good life and not even realizing it. you're also pro'ly afraid of death |
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